Nic Cobb

to turn far, please, not to disfigure with me (I love French) Odd title in my opinion, very odd. It is sad as the best always are. I was also ...

Here are some things that I found: The orc charged forward with a great double slash that would hasve decapitated Yuork--if he had been there. You need to take out ...

Well, it is too short, but I am sure that there will be more added to this chapter when it is published. Notice that I said "when" not "if". :wink: ...

There is a dark underbelly to society that no one knows of. It is alive and fused with courage and sin. When the night burns black in the sky and ...

I can completely relate to the message of the story. There are errors, but they are very minor typos and do not affect the quality of the piece. I also ...